The breaking of neurons;
Collision of neutrons;
Produces energy
Which I use to burn
Your effigy; in my mind
As I rewind; and witness
The spatial excess; that separates us
Like the unfathomable nothingness
Of silent emptiness; as we create
Super massive blackholes; with the clash
Of our egos.
The breaking of neurons;
Collision of neutrons;
The death of a star;
And all that remains with me
Is a deep, ghastly SCAR.
7 comments:
nicely conjured!!
;-))
"Your effigy; in my mind"
Well done!
among all the other things that i like about this piece of vignette (yeah i know that's an overstatement! lol ;)) this is what i like the most- you aren't blaming one person for the blackhole made from the clash of huge egos, you understand that both the egos would have contributed equally to the disaster that could have happened...
hmm 16th oct,2008...seems u havent written in a long while.
i couldnt get over neutrons and many other subatomic particles, waise, nicely written :)
I am reading it again in a hope to understand some more...
i think i m drunk, i had merely scanned ur words earlier. now that i have read it again, i can perceive the depths of the galactic phenomenon in the cranium of homo-sapiens! Hmm egos...
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